Conscience brings acceptance,son
Delinquents rebelling brings oppression
Weight bursting out
Late to experience shouts
L.i.f.e now means now-D.i.e
S.T.R.I.F.E with P.R.I.C.E
Purity Retaining, Innocent Claiming Elaboratley
Epitomes Colliding In Reconstructed Personality
Serenity Tamed, Revolving In Fertility and Empathy
Empty Feeling In Reasoning for Tough Sympathies
Awakening Maturity
Disendigrating Confusion
Mature… Awaken
Disintegrate confusion..
So in a nutshell I basically said
We all need to experience things, but not take it to far because you reap what you sow. Its a process we all most go through but some don’t know to what extent and either never truly reach maturity, or inhabit too much immaturity
For the first time I’m going to explain my message..in detail
This is rather long which I doubt ANYBODY is going to read but.. Yea…still going to because I’m bored.
The title “Which way do I turn” in itself is a message because it speaks about the struggle many of us are in, not knowing which side to choose after reading the poem. It is also a play off of words because this piece was originally intended to be read backwards,however, when read forwards it displays a completely different message-which also has an outstanding viewpoint.
Now I will break it down line for line
1 for backward(Intended reading)
2 for forward(regular reading)
Conscience brings aceptance,son
1-When we accept the deceit and lies of this world for what it truly is, we can finally wake up and become more understanding.Basically Saying we all need to stop thinking inside of the box.
2-This is basically saying that when we wake up from everyday dillusion like drama and lies of the media, we began to accept it for what it is because we cant really run from reality.
Delinquents rebelling brings opression
1-Many times people choose to oppress their kids hiding them from the painful realities of this world which eventually leads to their own misfortune.Lots of times the kids who are so sheltered end up exploding later in life since they’ve never actually had experience.
2-Plain and simple-In the world of teenagers that crave rebellion by committing in insubordinate activity just to fit in comes with consequences.
Weight bursting out
1-Being tied down for so long can result in outburst (as mentioned before)
2-Many times rebellion comes from the lack of self contemptment and pressure of society.
Late to experience shouts
1-Figurative way of saying people in this situation wait too late
2-Same
L.i.f.e now means now-D.i.e
1-Dieing to this world, a rather biblical term,as in choosing rebellion
Means we get to live life up now.
2-Eternal life,making it to heaven biblically speaking, depicts that in order to obtain that we must surrender to the things of this world..in this case rebellion
S.T.R.I.F.E with P.R.I.C.E
1-Theres a price to pay for doing things we aren’t supposed to be doing.
2-Same
Purity Retaining, Innocent Claiming Elaboratley
1-This is basically saying that alot of people who try to stay so perfect can end up being consumed by the struggle that this piece is speaking of.
2-The line in this direction is talking about the people who boast about how pure they are for peer approval. This was written to emphasis that purity should be a personal thing rather than for gratification.On the same token, this makes since vise versa for those who choose to rebel.
Epitomes Colliding In Reconstructed Personality
1-We will began to change once we let somebodies else philosophy become ours rather than staying true to our personal beliefs.This isn’t necessarily saying its a BAD thing, its just mentioning what many of us fail to realize.
2-Where we originally deemed we would be now may clash because were new people by choice we make
Serenity Tamed, Revolving In Fertility and Empathy
1.Empathy-understanding and entering into another’s feelings
Fertility- Capable of growing ,developing,reproducing ; able to mature
Serenity-the state or quality of being serene, calm, or tranquil; free of stress
Capable of growing and developing; able to mature
So basically once we find out who we are by the choices we make, we finally calm down and can help others along the way to finding out who they are.
This happens over, and over again throughout the cycle of growing up.
2. Same
Empty Feeling In Reasoning for Tough Sympathies
1-On the contrary, people who don’t find them-self are empty inside and don’t have the privelage of feeling that sympathy for others because they’re in the box themselves.
2-Its hard for us to feel any sympathy for those who face consequences after choosing to live a life of rebellion .As if thats making us empty ourselves..
Awakening Maturity
1-We’re growing up
2-This is the process thats making us grow up
Disendigrating Confusion
1-We’re finding out who we are
2-This process is helping us find out who we are
Mature…Awaken
Same
Disintegrate confusion..
Same
If you managed to read all of this thanksWe all have our own opinions and this is mine
